Spectrum

Spectrum

A Poem by Pen Draggin'

 Fantasy a fraction away from fright

On this stage

I am a poor player

We are all just

Walking shadows of life

Like flickering projections

Thrown on a cave wall

I am tied and bound

This is all I see

A predetermined storyline with none of my questions answered

The curtain falls on this player

Somewhere in between

© 2009 Pen Draggin'


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Fantasy a fraction away from fright
Great alliteration!

Posted 15 Years Ago


"A predetermined storyline with none of my questions answered". I don't agree with the implication here, that anything is really pre-determined in our lives. At least, not totally pre-determined. However, I share your observation about the scarcity of answers.

The "player" which you refer to, probably represents a player in life. As in, playing along with life's rich journey?

"I am tied and bound". I did wonder what exactly, the writer see as binding or restricting her? Does she mean, in her choice of options in life? Or some other form of barrier, to her way of thinking? "Like flickering projections". I was not clear about this, line. Even so, it could by a way of showing how uncertainty or weakness, is always present in our lives. Or, that our awareness of reality, "flickers" from rich understanding, to a dark abyss....

Posted 15 Years Ago


Amazing!!! I love the thoughts shared within this write!! Keep up the Great Work!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

That's pretty brilliant in my opinion. I love how you compared humans as just another projection in life... we all come and go. Words can't express how much I loved this. Awesome write! :]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. How long has it been since you posted something new? Either way, it's been way too long.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Pen Draggin'
Pen Draggin'

Portland, OR



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Hi! I'm Kelsey, I'm 22 years old with a passion for poetry. I write because it is innate and, quite simply, I'm pretty f*****g good at it. I love the rain. I will always belong to the Northwest. I sa.. more..

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