The wildflowers and you.

The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days

you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I can't pick a favourite for all three were equally lovely …. but the taunting playfulness of the last one brought the piece home with aplomb …. she says in a whisper:)

[Bare Trees]

Thank you Pryde.

[Lydia Shutter]

Gloriously romantic. You have entwined nature with the feelings of romance....and the creation is so lovely! Lydi**

[Bare Trees]

Thanks Lydia.

[Sheila Kline]

You have written many poems Tim, but this has to be among the most beautiful and romantic of them!! Your words are enough to make any gal swoon with stardust in her eyes!

[Bare Trees]

Thank you Sheila.

[Samuel Dickens]

Highly romantic. I think I can smell love in that field and hear whispers of sweet nothings.

[Bare Trees]

Thanks very much Sam.

[Rene Salinas]

To me this is like speaking in a different language. I can read the words and understand the meaning in fact when I finished I went. Awww that's so romantic! A rare moment of nebulous fragility in me trying to appeal to my non exsistent sensitive nature. Is just I am so far removed from this way of expressing that I can only admire those who can. This is like getting in touch with a feeling, then behold it and then write about it.

Great clarity

Thankyou

[Bare Trees]

Thanks for the review. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

The heart flutters at such sweetness, Tim - this is truly beautiful.

[Bare Trees]

Thank you very much Rita.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ana said it best...nothing i can add...this is insanely romantic....i wish i had written this poem...i can't do this.

[Bare Trees]

I'm flawed, thank you Jacob very much.

[Matching Socks]

I'm a tad speechless, this is so incredibly romantic.
A very beautiful poem.

[Bare Trees]

Thank you Ana.

[AprilRN1210]

oh my dear friend, this one is enchanting with its whispered words of enticement.. so inviting and beautiful.. the tender tone and layers of affection are palpable and captivating... I love the alliteration, the phrasing, the simplicity and sweet emotion.. you already know I am a huge fan, and this is exactly why.. awesome Tim.. this one melts hearts and makes the reader want to come and tell you anything:)

[Bare Trees]

They always can if they wish. Thank you April, you're always so kind.

[AprilRN1210]

it is always a pleasure, Tim.. you are more than welcome :)

[Bare Trees]

A big kiss to you. Smooooooooooch. :)

[AprilRN1210]

that one of those big, loud, wet, sloppy kisses?..

[Bare Trees]

Somewhere between that and a soft one. Gentle but persuasive you might say.

[AprilRN1210]

well, alrighty then!.. sounds like a treat I am more than happy to treasure :)

[Bare Trees]

...........:).............

[AprilRN1210]

*happy dance*... makes me giggle thinking back to those stick figures you tried to help me learn to use.. you remember?.. lol

[Bare Trees]

Do I? It sounds familiar?

[Bare Trees]

My last message didn't go through. Stick figures? Hmm, sounds familiar?

[AprilRN1210]

hey hey mister!... ummmm, yea you should!... sent me links and tons of those little guys duuuh!.. read morehey hey mister!... ummmm, yea you should!... sent me links and tons of those little guys duuuh!..
fine, I see how it is.. nothing left to do but pick up the pieces of my shattered ego and go pout :(

[AprilRN1210]

hey it ate my words.. ha!.. my luck..

what I said was.. guess nothing else left to do but pick up pieces of shattered ego and go pout.. lol of course WC would eat that!... grrrrrrr

[Bare Trees]

haha, I can't remember, hahahahaha It'll come to me later I'm sure, Links....stick figures...it'll come to me...

[AprilRN1210]

on AP... the little guy in shower, the sunglasses dude, the dancing one.. oh my gawd Tim!!! seriously.. I know it has been a while but jeez!... you used to make me giggle with those little guys..

[Bare Trees]

I've noticed its been eating words lately. Screwed up site. It hasn't frozen up as much though I've noticed.

[AprilRN1210]

yea, likes eating my words.. thinks I talk to much probably.. :)

[AprilRN1210]

*too*..... ate my "o".. not nice!

[Bare Trees]

OOOOOOOOHHHHHH, AP, yeah I remember that. I was thinking of this site. haha They cold use those little guys here. It would be better than :) or :D

[Bare Trees]

It ate my "u" in could. :)

[AprilRN1210]

lol... I see that... :P
and NOW you remember!.. pfffft..

[Awakened Rose]

Wow. This was so beautiful. So delicate, so demanding, so enchanting! Love this piece, thank you for sharing!

[Bare Trees]

Thank you for the nice review.