The wildflowers and you.

The wildflowers and you.

A Poem by Bare Trees

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The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days
you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

© 2019 Bare Trees


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I can almost get a whiff of the fragrance from the flowers as I read. Soft and dreamy, well done :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
Your words have a soft, sweet, dreamy feel. Absolutely stunning!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

So glad you liked it. Thank you MSJewel.
MsJewel

9 Years Ago

My pleasure
Your words are bold and beautiful and the imagery very vivid.....

Nicely penned

YB

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks for leaving your review, I appreciate it.
Beautifully penned! It is gentle and serene and delicate. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

I thank you Moonlight.
Lovely romantic poem… I like the delicate feeling you created.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you Momzilla.
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

yw :)
"Speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening"- That was so creative. The whole poem was but I loved that last line. Very beautiful and truly poetic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to read and review it. :)
uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns

9 Years Ago

Your welcome and thanks for sharing ha :-)
Beautiful work, this is really beautiful
Great work! I love this poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lizardo.
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

You are welcome
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Wow. I like this Tim a lot. Enchanting romance indeed...:).................

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks very much Sami.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......................
Wonderful! This is a very touching work of art:) nicely penned!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks Cool Girl.
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Ur welcome!
Beautiful piece and full of adoration for the subject. Great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tech.

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