The wildflowers and you.

The wildflowers and you.

A Poem by Bare Trees

Image result for love in a Lavender Field
The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days
you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

© 2019 Bare Trees


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Your words are bold and beautiful and the imagery very vivid.....

Nicely penned

YB

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks for leaving your review, I appreciate it.
Beautifully penned! It is gentle and serene and delicate. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

I thank you Moonlight.
Lovely romantic poem… I like the delicate feeling you created.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you Momzilla.
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

yw :)
"Speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening"- That was so creative. The whole poem was but I loved that last line. Very beautiful and truly poetic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to read and review it. :)
uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns

9 Years Ago

Your welcome and thanks for sharing ha :-)
Beautiful work, this is really beautiful
Great work! I love this poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lizardo.
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

You are welcome
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Wow. I like this Tim a lot. Enchanting romance indeed...:).................

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks very much Sami.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......................
Wonderful! This is a very touching work of art:) nicely penned!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks Cool Girl.
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Ur welcome!
Beautiful piece and full of adoration for the subject. Great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tech.
The person you write about seems truly magical. I could certainly imagine that she possesses the creative ability to make flowers jealous. Her loveliness in this poem seems to compel the earth to grown. Also, beautiful ending to this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks very much for such a nicely written review Clockwork.
Clockwork

9 Years Ago

You're welcome, Tim. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem.
The poem and photo is beautiful. The good description create good vision and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

I appreciate you taking the time to read it. Thank you.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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