The wildflowers and you.

The wildflowers and you.

A Poem by Bare Trees

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The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days
you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

© 2019 Bare Trees


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"Now, speak to me as if all
the flowers were jealous
and listening"

You could have knocked me over with a feather with that last verse. Wow, what a lovely, poetic piece this is...so wonderful to have stumbled upon it this evening!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I really love this! Very lovely :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
so lovely and soft spoken. love it Tina

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks Tina.
Quite sweet, I like how you toyed and personified words~

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
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Ohhhh how romantic

Whispers for sure

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks Nisreenaa, glad you liked it.
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Soft whispers of loving thoughts. I really like the beautiful descriptions and the images it created. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Wow, thanks Moonskittles, I really appreciate the review.
Beautiful. Sweet, loving and caring and the picture was a great combination.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Appreciate that. Thanks.
a fragrant write. tender and romantic. a very enjoyable read. well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I can almost get a whiff of the fragrance from the flowers as I read. Soft and dreamy, well done :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
Your words have a soft, sweet, dreamy feel. Absolutely stunning!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

So glad you liked it. Thank you MSJewel.
MsJewel

9 Years Ago

My pleasure

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