The wildflowers and you.

The wildflowers and you.

A Poem by Bare Trees

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The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days
you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

© 2019 Bare Trees


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When love is strong and unconditional, it feels like standing at the very summit of the highest mountain and all the world is envious!

Beautifully crafted sentiment, idyllic in words and imagery!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thanks very much.
"Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening."
Very nicely penned.
You're so poetic. The words make beautiful images on one's mind. :))

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
Ghania

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
Very nice, very poetic... awesome!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sourav.
Beautiful. A solid and power packed end. Much said in a few words. Loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thanks Zoe.
Zoya

7 Years Ago

No problem
I love this ....... ...:) x

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thank you Raven.
Very beautiful poem....and a nice pic to compliment the same...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thank you Ria.
Agree with Hebe very romantic and the picture emulates the image that you are trying to portray with these words

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thank you TJ.
So romantic .... so much needed in this cyber world. picture is perfect!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is a beautiful poem. It gives me the idea that nature hangs off of everything this girl does.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bare Trees

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
Kelly meant her comment and I would also say no less... words with that intent would melt rock... who could stand a chance listening...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bare Trees

8 Years Ago

Your review is appreciated. (and late)

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