The wildflowers and you.

The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days

you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

Reviews

[JackValor86]

wow... alot of people read this, and its so simple, you must have alot of other work to back this up

[Bare Trees]

Back it up?

[Susan 🦋]

Hmmm interesting little write here..Your imagery and wording is very strong..this picture a perfert compliment...but what of the feelings??...why am I stumbling on "Now, speak to me..." I almost feel there is a sence of neglect? Is it the flowers that admire this lovely lady...or the "writer" the one jealous that perhaps this lovely lady fails to speak such words to "him?" LOL or I could just be overthinking this lovely piece. Nicely done! You have me pondering every word.

[Bare Trees]

Hmm? that's a good question. I don't recall what I was thinking at the time I wrote it, but I believe "speak to me" meant in the sense of someone sharing their intimate words they would not speak around other people.

Yet, I left it to people's interpretations to do the thinking for them. :)

[Bare Trees]

Oh yeah, I was listening to dark side of the moon before I wrote it too. ha

[Tom]

When love is strong and unconditional, it feels like standing at the very summit of the highest mountain and all the world is envious!

Beautifully crafted sentiment, idyllic in words and imagery!

[Bare Trees]

Thanks very much.

[Ghania]

"Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening."
Very nicely penned.
You're so poetic. The words make beautiful images on one's mind. :))

[Bare Trees]

Thank you for the review.

[Ghania]

You're welcome. :)

[Sourav]

Very nice, very poetic... awesome!

[Bare Trees]

Thank you Sourav.

[Zoya]

Beautiful. A solid and power packed end. Much said in a few words. Loved it!

[Bare Trees]

Thanks Zoe.

[Zoya]

No problem

[Enchanted-Raven]

I love this ....... ...:) x

[Bare Trees]

Thank you Raven.

[Ardra]

Very beautiful poem....and a nice pic to compliment the same...

[Bare Trees]

Thank you Ria.

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

Agree with Hebe very romantic and the picture emulates the image that you are trying to portray with these words

[Bare Trees]

Thank you TJ.

[Hebe]

So romantic .... so much needed in this cyber world. picture is perfect!

[Bare Trees]

Thank you.