The wildflowers and you.

The wildflowers and you.

A Poem by Bare Trees

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The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days
you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

© 2019 Bare Trees


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My heart weeps at my inadequate verse.
How I long to express in flowing cascades
my adoration of your skill.
Ah! but I sit in silence as the student sits
at the knee of the exceptional teacher.

Posted 1 Week Ago


A second read. Well worth the visit.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Bare Trees

1 Week Ago

Thanks very much, Chris. :)
Beautiful words, picture and romantic union of both.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Bare Trees

10 Months Ago

Thank you, Emma.
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...Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening...
Your entire poem was a breath of fresh air. I hope many readers find this beautiful poem I especially liked the closing stanza.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bare Trees

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Cherrie for your nice comment.
Delightful poetry. A field of wild flowers is poetry itself. I really enjoyed your poetic expression here. Nice work.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bare Trees

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Chris.
Beautiful words accompanied by beautiful scenery, who could ask for more? I love fields of wildflowers. It reminds me of driving through Texas and seeing the flower fields that stretch for miles. I like the line, "the moon off the water winks". Nicely done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Bare Trees

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review.
Fabian G. Franklin

2 Years Ago

My pleasure. It's pretty, both the poem and the pic. I'm a lover of beauty in all forms.
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Rye
Aww so very beautiful, I like this write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Bare Trees

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
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what an incredible poem, I've never read something so beautiful
your muse is one to hold on to!



Posted 6 Years Ago


Bare Trees

6 Years Ago

You're very kind, thank you.
"Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening."

Simply beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bare Trees

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
Heaven on earth, expressing loves presences. Beautiful done, my I say.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bare Trees

6 Years Ago

Thanks very much.

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