Voyeur

Will you meet me tonight,

late, at your window?

I need to see you

like a stargazer

sees the skies.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

short, simple, concise lines that hold power and promise with tenderness that is hard to achieve.. the flow makes the reader stop and notice each and every word hanging on them.. it holds sweet innocence mixed with deeper longing and affection--with just the right amount of romance and mystery.. very nice!..

[Bare Trees]

You have such a nice way of describing things, :) Thank you.

[AprilRN1210]

ummm a writer should have "their way" of describing things, right? :P
sorry couldn't resist.. just write what you make me see, think, and feel... you are always more than welcome Tim.. you are THE reason that I am here and have the confidence to share what I do.. for that, I thank you :)

[Bare Trees]

You have tons of talent, it should be shown. Any influence I have is a huge compliment so thanks for that.

[AprilRN1210]

awwww, and you know dang well you have a huge influence, so shush!.. ((hugs)) and semi sloppy wet kisses to you my sweet friend..

[Bare Trees]

(Big smile).

[Awakened Rose]

Simple, in the most beautiful way. In love with your words !

[Bare Trees]

You're very kind, thanks again.

[Matching Socks]

I love this, depending on who the man doing the gazing is, it can be wonderfully romantic.

[Bare Trees]

Glad you think so, Thanks my friend.

[Megan]

Voyeurism is sexy. I've been meaning to write something about it. Thank you. This poem is elegant.

[Bare Trees]

Keep your window open and I'll watch than. aha Thanks.

[Mai Marquez]

Romantic. Every woman wants her love to gaze upon her like a star. Wonderful work. Good line breaks that allow the reader to feel your inner voice.

[Bare Trees]

Thanks very much.

[MzC]

this has IMPACT...and ommph...oh the power of succinctness...!

[Bare Trees]

Thank you. I consider my words buds of ideas compared to your flowers.

[MzC]

awwww thank you but, you have more than buds my new friend! keep tending the garden...:)

[Bare Trees]

Oh, I'm always trying to fill my pail with water. :)

[MzC]

lol...carry on then...;)

[Bare Trees]

I'll try. ;)

[The Nude Writer]

Short, simple.. But oh so beautiful :)

[Bare Trees]

Your one review has made my day. It is all I need to let me know one person enjoyed what I wrote. Bless you my poetic friend.

[The Nude Writer]

Glad I could bring you some joy :)