Voyeur

Will you meet me tonight,

late, at your window?

I need to see you

like a stargazer

sees the skies.

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

cute poem, has the essence it need...we all like to be stargazers. Glad you shared this. :) Rudi

[Bare Trees]

Thanks for reading Rudi.

[Zahra]

Cute and simple.
I need to see you
to watch you
like a stargazer
watches the skies

[Bare Trees]

Thanks very much for reading Zahra.

[Zahra]

you're welcome. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Meet me tonight
late
at your window.

I need to see you
to watch you
like a stargazer
watches the skies"

[Bare Trees]

Yup, pretty much. :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)....................

[Lizardo]

Its simple but the message is beautiful
Great poetry

[Bare Trees]

Thank you for taking a look Lizardo.

[Lizardo]

You are welcome

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Simple, elegant and complex this packs so much desire and passion in to a few lines

[Bare Trees]

That's what I was hoping for. Thanks so much for the review.

[Alfred Kukitz]

For a small piece very powerful!

[Bare Trees]

Thanks very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the second stanza....if you can find it, listen to the song by New Colony Six, "Can't you see my cry"
this reminds me a bit of that...

very romantic piece.

[Bare Trees]

Thanks Jacob, I'll look for it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i just checked, Tim---you tube has it...

[Bare Trees]

haha, listening to it now. Old but a good song. I can see what you mean. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

:)
yes, old like me...from the sixties....

[Bare Trees]

The sixties had some great music. The classics four was a group I like a lot. Or were they in the seventies?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very end of the sixties...good group yes, "Spooky" "Stormy" "Traces of Love"

good stuff, bluesy...

[Bare Trees]

Spooky and stormy are basically the same song. Love them both.

[AYVID N]

You are such a truly romantic writer. Amazing and the best writing for me today.

[Bare Trees]

Thank you very much DIVYA.

[Lydia Shutter]

Short and sweet...and ultra romantic. Any poem with celestial references is right up my alley. Lydi**

[Bare Trees]

Thank you Lydi. :)