Voyeur

Voyeur

A Poem by Bare Trees

Image result for Looking out her window painting

Will you meet me tonight,
late, at your window?

I need to see you
like a stargazer
sees the skies.

© 2019 Bare Trees


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Cute and simple.
I need to see you
to watch you
like a stargazer
watches the skies

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks very much for reading Zahra.
Zahra

9 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
"Meet me tonight
late
at your window.

I need to see you
to watch you
like a stargazer
watches the skies"

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Yup, pretty much. :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

:)....................
Its simple but the message is beautiful
Great poetry

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking a look Lizardo.
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

You are welcome
Simple, elegant and complex this packs so much desire and passion in to a few lines

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

That's what I was hoping for. Thanks so much for the review.
For a small piece very powerful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thanks very much.
love the second stanza....if you can find it, listen to the song by New Colony Six, "Can't you see my cry"
this reminds me a bit of that...

very romantic piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

The sixties had some great music. The classics four was a group I like a lot. Or were they in the se.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

very end of the sixties...good group yes, "Spooky" "Stormy" "Traces of Love"

good stuff.. read more
Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Spooky and stormy are basically the same song. Love them both.
You are such a truly romantic writer. Amazing and the best writing for me today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare Trees

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much DIVYA.
Short and sweet...and ultra romantic. Any poem with celestial references is right up my alley. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bare Trees

10 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi. :)
A wonderful write. Thank you for sharing...:).........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bare Trees

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Sami.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......

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Added on October 19, 2014
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