A Story

A Poem by Pegs Van Damme

Yesterday
I walked past a fellow
who
is a dead fellow
today

© 2014 Pegs Van Damme

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Ian Gilmour

Beautiful in its' simplicity, well done. The pause between the two time tenses was perfectly placed and really hits home the ending.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Ashley Griffiths

Life really is that fleeting. Great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

thank you!

Matching Socks

This should be read as a reminder that random things happen in life. You just never know when it's going to end. Reading this right now after watch the MH17 coverage... Further proof it can end in a flash...

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Absolutely. it's short so that others can fill in the blanks.

10 Years Ago

Yes, perfect!

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Added on July 18, 2014
Last Updated on July 19, 2014

Author

Pegs Van Damme

Silver City, NM

About

I read over my bio once, and realized it was bullshit. We all live, we all try, the only difference is some of us translate that onto a page while the rest just focus on the experience. I'm a documen.. more..