How to kiss her like kissing is an art

There is no destination here.

You have arrived. Between lips

The little girl resides, between lips 

Collide like things that float in outer space 

Make her eye shut up the windows to souls

Her mouth is the door

To everything she owns

The vessel of everything she knows

Whispers and cries you could taste it all

The unsaid words you can take it all

Onto yours

That's the magic

 

Don't break it off...off

Don't break it off

And when you start again it'll be more

Magnificent.

There is no destination here.

You have arrived. Between her lips.

The hate and pain and love all reside

You can taste it all

 

Author's Note

I'm sure there are a 100 grammatical errors

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I do like this as it makes one think about the power of the kiss. It is an interesting free verse that uses repitition as emphasis. I do however feel it did not live up to its title because it does not describe the spiritual closeness that two people share in a mutual and meaningful kiss. Rather it paints 'him' as the knight come to rescue the damsel.

[Jolan H]

Poetry has no rules neither does the depths of passion. Don't sell yourself short your words are beautiful

[Peggy Olson]

Thank you, that's very kind. I really appreciate it 😊❤

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Wow this is beautiful I’ve not read your work before I’m excited to read more

[Peggy Olson]

Thanks so much. I hope you enjoy. I'll love giving yours a read too😊❤

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Ha ha ok thanks 🙏

[The Twin Arenas]

"Her mouth is the door" is a nice line.

[Peggy Olson]

Thanks a lot for the feedback😊

[Ardra]

Beautifully done.... a kiss ... a meaningful one...can open gate ways to the soul....And when two souls meet the kiss is were it all began....:)
Love the way you have captured it...

[Peggy Olson]

Absolutely. Thanks so much for the feedback 😊

[Adam Latham]

Oops...I forgot, I should have rated it. My bad. :)

[Adam Latham]

Wow, Peggy! What a brilliant poem. So well written...and I especially love that kind of six lined second verse...

"Her mouth is the door
To everything she owns
The vessel of everything she knows
Whispers and cries you could taste it all
The unsaid words you can take it all
Onto yours"

That part is just amazing. Great stuff!

[Peggy Olson]

Thanks so much for the positive feedback. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, Adam😊