One Summer's Morn

For just a moment caught in time, a lovely Monarch butterfly, a perfect rose and I were one.

One Summer's Morn A butterfly came passing by the window in my room. I watched it twirl and, slowly, swirl until it picked a bloom. In morning's light, this precious sight could take one's breath away If senses dared to comprehend how grand was this display. A rose stood bare on one long stem where butterfly had lit; And, while I sipped my cup of tea, I watched the monarch flit. No pattern seemed to mark the flight of whimsy I dared view; But, in my mind, I did create a fantasy or two. If I could be that butterfly, I wondered where I'd go And if I'd pay attention to those watching from below. Perhaps I, too, would find the view of that one precious rose A perfect place from which to trace the dreams that thoughts expose. For just a moment caught in time, that butterfly and I Were one in nature's wondrous world---and I shan't question why. By Sharon Miller Bolander © 2011 Sharon Miller Bolander (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[Anna]

I'm impressed with your ability to write. That is a thing I rarely get the chance say these days. You have quite a talent, and I'm afraid that I've become a fan. I relate the feel of your words to mine, and the way I believe you think reminds me of myself. I find such peace in this poem. It's very well done, and flows like a river.

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

There's nothing better for those of us who enjoy writing than someone else who takes the time to read and leave a comment. Thank you for your kindness and encouragement.

[Anna]

You're very welcome. :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

Gorgeous poetry, Sharon! I didn't know until just now I'd find you on this site, but I'm so happy I have. I've always loved your poetry and this one is a gem.

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Thank you, Joyce. I still write occasionally but am not very active these days on any of the poetry sites.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Quite soothing and gleeful!
emotional and nice!
very emotional and attractive!!

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Thank you for reading and commenting. Sharon

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you for writing, Sharon!

[John]

Nothing better than watching a butterfly to get the creative juices flowing.

[angelina neves]

very beautiful!

[Raspberry Rebel]

This is simply divine, a wonderful uplifting poem...it's nice to be able to stop awhile and capture natures beauty in its full glory.

[Helen Crutchett]

There was something wonderfully spiritual in your endearing poem. Such beauty abounding and it filled up my senses and took me into the world of that wondrous rose and elegant butterfly. Thank you for submitting this to the "Ten" Sharon.