Composition of a Nightmare

Compression poem - six lines with 4-5-6-6-5-4 syllables rhyme pattern is a/b/a/c/d/a

 

Composition of a Nightmare   Within a dream, wanders deep despair. When nothing hides its scream revealed from depths of pain, thoughts that hid from view shall gather steam. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Compression Poem created by Sector Hunter Six lines with 4-5-6-6-5-4 syllabic count Rhyme pattern is a/b/a/c/d/a (Lines 1, 3, and 6 all rhyme; the other lines do not.) By Sharon Miller Bolander   © 2009  (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[Legion]

That is really cool. I love the pic as well. Brilliant.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Excellent compression poem!

[Helena]

Wow! Awesome submission! Bravo! ~ Helena