Positive Thinking in a Negative World

10/40 using Tovli's Ten Words: BURST, WOUND, TATTERS, ROOTS, FLASH, APPEAL, SEARING, EARS, CONCEIVED, FLOWER

 

Positive Thinking in a Negative World     Roots conceived a flower dream amidst the tatters winter bore and wound appeal where none might seem beneath the gloom of nevermore. Burst icicles of thought flash from winter's tomb; searing intellect holds taut daring eyes and ears in bloom.       By Sharon Miller Bolander    © 2008 Peggy Paris (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A beautiful Write. Well Done

[Helena]

"Burst icicles of thought
flash from winter's tomb;"

l loved those lines, made me feel so cool!!! Beautiful in every respect! ~ Helena

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Well done, Sharon. Great word choices.

Sal

[angelina neves]

Beautiful! Well dserved wining!

[Tovli]

lovely. frankly, i think it is more difficult to take a 10/40 and place it in classic structure, such as a rhyme. I think you did a great job accomplishing this--not only succeding with the challenge, but form and creating a flawless seem with imagery and message. nicely done. tovli