A Lovely Punch In The Face.

A Lovely Punch In The Face.

A Poem by Rachael
"

Got caught up in some stupid confusion. Ha. Ohh joy.

"

Will I ever be good enough?

Enough for your demands.

Enough for your satisfaction.

You're so high-maitnence

And high on fake emotions.

Do they know you like I do?
Do they care for you like I do?

Again and again

This heartache returns.

I'm shaking and shivering

At the chill of your betrayal.

My chest burns intensely

At the heat of my rage.

The tears, why don't they stop?

You were so great,

So sweet. so kind,

So caring, so loving,

So gentle, so tender,

So perfect.

However the bitter truth

Has removed this blindfold of love,

And showed me the pain I was meant to feel.

What did I do?

Do I really deserve this?

You said forever and ever.

As did I.

But I cannot say

Forever and ever

If you continue to lie.

I shall remain here;

Curled up in my sadness,

Cuddling my depression,

Whispering sweet nothings to my conscience,

And just hoping on everything that I am

That you'll just go away.

Leave me to suffer alone,

and decay in my f*****g misery.

© 2008 Rachael


Author's Note

Rachael
BLAH BLAH BLAHJVHDFDSKHSALDA. lol I almost typed "Salad". :DDD

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I like it. I felt it, too. This is one of my favorites that i have read today. And on the authors note, you did almost type salad! Haha thats good. :) Good job

Posted 16 Years Ago


SORRY SHANEY I LOVE YOU :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 5, 2008
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Rachael
Rachael

Jamestown, NY



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After every extraordinary experience I've had, I'm finding now that I'm just an average high school student. My eyes have seen hurtful, saddening, and cheerful things for nearly 17 years now. I'm much.. more..

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