Pins and Needles.

Love is such a silly thing..

Excuse me as I tremble

At the thought of you, but

The very thread of your existance

Sends a chill through my own.

Pardon me if I'm taking too long

Sputtering out my confusion,

Hoping the right words can save this.

All of the tears in the whole world

Could never drown away my love,

My feelings for you, the bond between us.

Holding back so many thoughts;

Maybe just trying to fill a conversation,

But how pointless could it be?

I lie awake at night wondering about you,

If you could possibly be doing the same;

Doubting the thought, but loving the idea of it.

Do you realize the impact you've created

On my soul, on my life, my everything?

So far, so good, let's continue

Together through this winding trail

Of lies and betrayal; so together.

We don't need to be for an eternity,

Just as long as it's raining flower pedals

I'll never let you go, in this month;

This month of heavenly emotions.

Author's Note

Opinions welcome.

Reviews

[Lauren Marie]

Discovered this poem by randomly clicking around the site. Hope you don't mind that I'm reviewing year old work. It's new to me, anyways.

But this writing was so amazing! I can relate to it a lot. Loving someone but they don't know you exist ... been there!

You conveyed your emotions nicely. Great write!
~Lauren

[Ian]

It's really emotive. I like it. good write! =)

[Mercury Mirrors]

:] aww sweet...I was lying awake wondering last night =[. Don't even think he was doing the same >.< I like this a lot though, good job.

[Life Inside Death]

=]
it's beautiful rachael.
that's all i can say
better than anything i've written

[L.G. Knight]

I have been there and done that relationship...the I love you for forever... or atleast for as long and sunshine shines and roses bloom.... It's such a heart breaking thing to realize you were the love of a moment but you try so hard to fight for it anyway because you realize everything might now be perfect but just because he say's the sun aint shining dosen't mean it can't.... That is what I got from the first reading and I really liked it.... Nicely Done!

We don't need to be for an eternity,

Just as long as it's raining flower pedals

I'll never let you go, in this month;

This month of heavenly emotions.


Nice ending! I really did enjoy it so much!

~Frances~