You Make Sanity Seem Unattainable.

Poem about my mom. >>;

Hiding in this corner
Tears running down my face.
Are you happy now, dear mother?
You've put me in my place.

She's the center of my anger,
The focus of my rage!
Submissive to her violence
Imprisoned in her evil cage.

These pills are making me dizzy
These cuts put my body into shock.
So cold, my body is frozen.
My heart composed of solid rock.

Her screams are so vicious
A piercing fear pulses fast.
She's a fear that can't be faced.
How long will her reign of terror last?

Defending yourself is pointless.
Nothing can save you from her wrath.
Exposed to raw negativity,
She'll take you down the wrong path.

She waits for your surrender
Her lethal words seeping through like toxic.
Disintegrating into the unknown,
Finally in peace, I'm no longer sick!

Author's Note

Eh, tell me what you think? :]

Reviews

[L.G. Knight]

Wow this is sad... very very sad full of anger but the undertone is very sad.... its an epedimic I tell you... all the abuse in the world... The flow and rhyme on this poem are awesome and the subject matter rips at a persons heart like a shredder...very nicely done!

~Frances~

[surayne]

omg ur mom is a witch.
i love you baby!
very very good