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A Poem by Eileen
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Cause you really hurt me.

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Maybe it will be like this forever,
You'll always be with someone else.
Someone better.
She'll break your heart, ripping it in half.
She left you broken.
Guess it's in the past.
Yet you sit here and tell me
About all your good memories. 
Remembering all the things you miss,
Like her smile, her laugh,
Her kiss.

I'm jealous. 

© 2012 Eileen


Author's Note

Eileen
Just another vent. Thanks for giving me a reason to write....

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when love is the world, and that world is destroyed by a false sense of
security, such is the emotional connection when friends take a
relationship to the next level, you grasp the identity of the meaning
with vivid passion, and a context that tugs on the readers heart.
the passion reflects pure poetry by design ^_^


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I know this feeling well.. it's good to let it out. i don't know what to say about this other than it was really good to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The curt manner of the poem adds to the jealousy and anger of the speaker! Beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

when love is the world, and that world is destroyed by a false sense of
security, such is the emotional connection when friends take a
relationship to the next level, you grasp the identity of the meaning
with vivid passion, and a context that tugs on the readers heart.
the passion reflects pure poetry by design ^_^


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Eileen
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Hi. I'm Eileen. I'm 16 and a junior in high school. I am an artist, a past passion of mine was writing. Thought I am currently more involved in the visual arts. I play guitar, flute, ukulele, a.. more..

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