Battlefield of Pride

In this war, I win.

Tattered and useless I seem to now stand

Shouting and shouting your name to the air

I walked and tripped to reach a point I can't

Pride kicking and ending the war unfair

 

Gasping and fighting you seem to now be

Drowning and drowning your eyes of bright black

Are closing to face truth, hate, and just me

I know today and never you'll be back

 

Question our fates and whisper my lost name

Didn't you think that for it I would do all?

Surrender now and life won't be the same

Could pride and love ever twine and not fall?

 

Too far to walk back to the start of pride

Your heart dead and wanting, from me, to hide

Reviews

[Linda]

I love this one!!!! It's so well written and I can almost imagine the story here :3
you write awesome sonnets! keep up the great work with this type of poems!

[Andrea R.]

thanks!!! :D

[The Invisible Girl]

I'm not into sonnets and poems but this is an exception! :) It's well-written and makes me think! Can't wait to read more of your work! :D

[Andrea R.]

Thank you! I love sonnets because I can express my feelings with that twist that I love to give to my writing!!!

[The Fallen]

Good write :)

[Andrea R.]

Thanks! :D