Cascade of Lovely Red

My feelings are washing and washing away...

Take me home where I can truly belong

Away from worlds that speak nothing but lies

Do not make the journey of life too long

Hearing a love that with the wind it dies

 

Along, I see leaves of love turning blue

Earth of life sinking to become no more

Withered, the trees of gold cannot more bloom

My heart of white slowly becoming sore

 

Lament is rushing past my tortured soul

Washing my face with drops of newborn life

Ending at last, the ride to free this love

The sea is departing to see its wife

 

Take me there where I can truly love you

Away from worlds that speak nothing but truth

 

Reviews

[Linda]

Aww...great sonnet! You do have a talent at writing!
I'm going to take a wild guess and think that what you're talking about in this is about how you're heartbroken yet you're in love with that person...well, not you but I mean, the speaker :P
Anywho, great sonnet and keep on writing such beauties! Can't wait for what's to come from you, Andy girl :)

[EliAquino]

Beautiful

[Andrea R.]

Thanks!!

[Kenaz]

I like it. But the last line threw me off. You started with a world that speaks nothing but lies. Did you intend for the last to say "Away to worlds that speak nothing but truth." Otherwise well done.

[Andrea R.]

No...I know what I wrote
But thanks nevertheless :)

[Kenaz]

It's just me haha :)

[Andrea R.]

lol, it's ok :D

[Craba]

WOW!! Very deep and amazing. You're very poetic as well. Awesome write.

[Andrea R.]

Thank you, thank you!
I'm glad you liked the sonnet...never thought they were be good for others to like :)

[David Scott]

Very nice! I feel a broken heart. A desire to escape reality. Great fantasy of escape and visualization of love and the forces that pull our hearts around.

[Andrea R.]

Thanks!!!

[The Invisible Girl]

I love your sonnet!! :D

[Andrea R.]

Thank you! :D

[Sami Khalil]

I agree . You write nice sonnets .

[Andrea R.]

Thanks for liking my writing! I didnt think i could write sonnets that others could like :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...

[The Fallen]

Another amazing write :)

[Andrea R.]

Thanks :) Glad you liked the sonnet!