The Monster Inside

The Monster Inside

A Poem by Emilie
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So... I was bummed. And I write emo poetry when I'm sad. :P

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A father's laugh,
a mother's touch,
a smiling child,
who had so much

Loving family,
to all who see,
except, of course,
for plain, old me

A quiet type,
not much to hear,
but soon, they'd see
the beast appear

Always a lover,
never so vile,
but inside of me,
a demon, docile

Quiet and elusive,
yet deadly and cruel
the beast in me,
needs so little fuel

A tone turned harsh,
or a look made mocking,
it was no longer me,
but the beast talking

For a minute, an hour,
or maybe a day,
it was no longer mine,
but the demon's stay

I wish for reprieve,
for sunlight to see,
but there is no escape,
when the monster is me

© 2009 Emilie


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Pretty amazing for your first post. Are we going to see more of this self evident tone of truth? I really love the last verse "I wish for repreive, sunlight to see, but there is no escape, when the monster is me. Very nicely done!!

all faded blue

Posted 15 Years Ago


See! I told you that you write amazingness! And you didn't believe me! : P

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very well put together, I think it was a great first write. I look forward to reading more of your work , good job : )

Posted 15 Years Ago



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