About something so simple that some people would say not a very important topic.
Though you have made this poem come to life, the topic becomes very meaningful, and something as simple as a grandma teaching her grand kids to knit becomes a very great poem topic indeed.
This story shows it can take something quite simple to get two people to bond and become really close.
I loved the rhyme scheme to it is flawless. The whole poem is set out great.
Amazing write :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind, encouraging words, cimmy!
beautiful poem! this brings back memories for me too as my great grandma would work all year to have new scarfs made for everyone by Christmas! Beautifully written, thank you for sharing :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you! I'm glad it brought back positive memories for you!
A lovely heritage. I learned knitting at about that age and was surprised it came back 40 years later when I tried. With you, it's more than the knitting that was instilled. Thank God for grandmas :) Thank you for the lovely read. I.I.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
My grandmother was a beautiful woman, inside and out. I strive to be like her every day!
7 Years Ago
It would be great if all kids had someone like that growing up!
About something so simple that some people would say not a very important topic.
Though you have made this poem come to life, the topic becomes very meaningful, and something as simple as a grandma teaching her grand kids to knit becomes a very great poem topic indeed.
This story shows it can take something quite simple to get two people to bond and become really close.
I loved the rhyme scheme to it is flawless. The whole poem is set out great.
Amazing write :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind, encouraging words, cimmy!
This is pretty damn good and you don't force the rhymes too much. I kind of want to make two suggestions but I don't want to make you change something that's already so good...
I dunno.... I'd say.. this is really good and keep honing your craft.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Feel free to let me know of your suggestions! I would love to hear your thoughts. If anything, I can.. read moreFeel free to let me know of your suggestions! I would love to hear your thoughts. If anything, I can make some changes and see how the new version looks - I may like it!
My name is Krysha, and I go by PeacefulPieces. I have been making up stories and lines that rhyme since I could first talk. It culminated in earning a BA in English and Creative Writing in 2014.
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