He Was Fourteen

He Was Fourteen

A Poem by Raven Lightner
"

It's just...about my cousin and how me and him could talk about more things than we do...he's more like a brother to me...so...yeah...

"
Green,
Brown,
Clear,
Blue,
White.
What do all these have in common?
They're all colors from memories 
of camping with my cousins.

We drove from home
Up to Granny and Oompa's house
In Mom's brick-red Ford Explorer.

One summer, we had brought so much
stuff, there wasn't enough room for Lucas.
He ended up in the back--in the trunk.

We stopped suddenly, once, and he hit his 
head on the back of our back seats. We 
laughed so hard we were crying.

Driving to Ipsit Creek Campsite up near
Mt. Rainier took about five or six hours,
So we'd usually get to our spot around six
 
Or seven o'clock at night. We'd stay there for
three days, and go through eighteen eggs within
one of them. There were six of us, so, ya know...

We went on hikes, we slept in tents. Not falling 
asleep until ten or midnight, but waking up at

The crack of dawn because of the light filtering in
through the tent and the pine trees surrounding 
us. 

When we hiked, sometimes we'd go to a lake at the 
base of a waterfall. It was always beautiful and one 
of my favorite memories is from there. Luke was on

A rock and Layne snuck up behind him. Layne pushed
him in, splashing and sputtering, and then Luke pulled
Layne in with. 

It was another one of those laugh and cry moments. I 
have another memory from hiking: To get to the lake, you
have to first go over a bunch of wooden bridges over different

branches of a river. The first one was only a flattened, 8 inch 
wide log. I remember freaking out and saying I wouldn't go 
across. Everyone went, the Dad, then me, and Lucas was behind

me. Another memory isn't from hiking. I had just woken up and 
gotten some sweats on and I walked out to find Luke sitting by
the fire in sweats and a lot of other warm stuff, shaking, his hair

all wet. I found out later that he'd seen Dad dunking his head in the
river (which got its water straight from a glacier stream) and 
wanted to try it out himself. He found out the hard way that it was

freezing cold. When we went home we'd have just as much fun as
when we were going up there. The only difference being having to
say goodbye once we got back to Granny and Oompa's. I remember

all of this and I was seven. Could Lucas possibly have remembered too, considering he was fourteen?

© 2011 Raven Lightner


Author's Note

Raven Lightner
Lucas (Luke) and Layne are my cousins. Luke is about six and a half years older than me (so he's 21 and a half now) and Layne's a year older than me. The only reasons I wrote this (this one's new) was because we're not as close as we used to be...I miss that. Plus: good memories, ya know? Anyways, if you guys are on here (which I highly doubt) I love you to death. <3

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

183 Views
Added on June 17, 2011
Last Updated on June 17, 2011

Author

Raven Lightner
Raven Lightner

WA



About
Um...about me? I'm kind of horrible writing about myself unless it's a poem. But...here goes. Interests of mine are, obviously, writing, softball (though I can't play it), Harry Potter club, learni.. more..

Writing