Stranger

               

                   Stranger

                   I feel like a stranger in my own surroundings

                   A refugee in my own home

                   Everyone is beside me

                   But I feel...different

                   I need a place to hide

                   The fear of death is slowly eating me up

                   It's a parasite, feeding on my blood

                   Save me.

Author's Note

I was in a lot of pressure so needed to vent.reviews are appreciated!

Reviews

[Ethereal Eclipse]

sounds amazingly similar to how i feel in my home... not exactly pleasant. i hope things get better for you

[Lonely Islander]

Thanks a lot:-):-):-D.

[Ethereal Eclipse]

your welcome:) no problem:)

[Talismanic]

Stark and hurts, how real this feels...:)

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you so much:-):-):-D.

[Leigh]

This sounds quite alarming, perhaps its the red text, I can relate to this, changes are forever occuring in my mind,

[Lonely Islander]

Thank u so much. I am glad u could relate to it.:-):-):-D.

[Traci]

A short, very intense, emotional piece of work. Loved it. Look forward to reading more of your work!

[Lonely Islander]

Thank u so much:-):-):-D.

[Dean]

Welcome death...do not fear it. In the meantime, exercise your passion...I do.

Thank you for visiting my page, today.

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you too:-):-):-D.

[Lonely Islander]

Oh this is so touching.... especially to me, I recognize myself in it, as breathing time is so essential sometimes, and we need no others or no thoughts of others, just dwell on our own heartbeat~ this is where my beloved ones feel me. And I them
Pure freedom of venting.... wonderful write...

E.L.

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you so much! It means a lot:-):-):-D.

Very welcome my friend :)

[fireblossom]

This is something we can all probably relate to. Fear of death... Alone...

Well written.

[Lonely Islander]

Thanks:-):-):-D.

[Pax]

don't let death eat you whole. For me i try to understand each situation looking for positive vibes despite everything in my head rings of despair...
Intense work my friend.

[Lonely Islander]

Thanks dear friend:-):-):-D.

[captain]

pressure, sadness and etc are great muse. You have done a great job on this intense emotional release. well done!

[Lonely Islander]

Thank u:-):-):-D.

[RachelReaper]

I know EXACTLY how you feel. God knows how many times my dad said, "You don't really think you'll make it in the writing world, do you?", if everyone else is against you, at some point you've just got to say eff them and do whatever you want. This struck home for me, I love this

[Lonely Islander]

I'm glad you could connect to this, reaper. Your dad has no idea what he is talking about because you are an amazing writer, just amazing and you have inspired me. Yes you r right, sometimes we have to do what we wanrt. Keep believing in yourself. Thanks for the review reaps:-):-):-D.