Suicide

There are always other ways to find peace

Suicide

One second the world is so beautiful

One cut I don't wanna leave

I wanna live my life in all its beauty 

Live a life free from someone's false pity

And stand tall with my head held high.

 

Its funny how the fear of death just drives you over the edge

When you know you don't wanna live

But still afraid to breathe your last breath.

 

 

Its funny how when you know you are gonna die

And Death is knocking on your door

He's gonna take you to the sky

And then you suddenly wanna live

You learn your responsibilities, your dreams are now too vivid

You don't want your life to end

The importance of life, you slowly comprehend

As that minute's decision makes you feel like a criminal

Guilty for leaving your loved ones behind, so sad and lonely.

 

Its funny how the world seems so peaceful

And the darkness slowly disappear

When you have death breathing on your neck.

 

Author's Note

I am proud of this and it means a lot to me. so what do you think?

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

you should be proud of this :) what I got out of this is that suicide seems like the way out... until your staring at the flaming gates of hell. Then life doesn't seem so bad anymore.

[Lonely Islander]

and that's the message i wanted to convey....thanks reaps

[Pax]

Its funny how the fear of death just drives you over the edge
When you know you don't wanna live
But still afraid to breathe your last breath.
~ such a surreal feeling... and i really like the message you brought...and you should be proud of this write... you achieved something wonderful, see realities beauty behind the sad fate...
i say great write.

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you so much pax:-):-):-D.

[Sourodip]

I absolutely loved the way you have described life and death in the poem......Death too is an endless mystery like life.....isn't it?
'' your dreams are now too vivid'' loved this thought....maybe its like that....maybe death is like the way you described...who knows....Great piece of writing....

[Lonely Islander]

thank you so much for your review.....it means a lot:-):-):-).

[Kyle Sky]

Lovely- simply lovely. I love its meanins,message, and mood it gave off. There's so much said in this poem but it one thing is evident, that you realise life's dreams when you feel that life is gone for you. Beautiful piece.

[Lonely Islander]

thank you so much:-):-).