Suicide

There are always other ways to find peace

Suicide

One second the world is so beautiful

One cut I don't wanna leave

I wanna live my life in all its beauty 

Live a life free from someone's false pity

And stand tall with my head held high.

 

Its funny how the fear of death just drives you over the edge

When you know you don't wanna live

But still afraid to breathe your last breath.

 

 

Its funny how when you know you are gonna die

And Death is knocking on your door

He's gonna take you to the sky

And then you suddenly wanna live

You learn your responsibilities, your dreams are now too vivid

You don't want your life to end

The importance of life, you slowly comprehend

As that minute's decision makes you feel like a criminal

Guilty for leaving your loved ones behind, so sad and lonely.

 

Its funny how the world seems so peaceful

And the darkness slowly disappear

When you have death breathing on your neck.

 

Author's Note

I am proud of this and it means a lot to me. so what do you think?

Reviews

[AmySabon]

This write is awesome. I can relate to this. And I think I say this for everyone when I say that you know a write is good if you can sit down and think about it on so many levels. There's truth in and between the lines. Right on, I love it.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Had a lesson learned. There's courage in it, for someone has the strength to refuse death though life is uncertain.
Good write.

[Lonely Islander]

Thanks:-).

[. - .]

Expresses one's feelings very well! ^.^

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you:-).

[♥ Kinnixk]

Wow. Very vivid. I love the last stanza
"Its funny how the world seems so peaceful
And the darkness slowly disappear
When you have death breathing down your neck."
For some reason this stands out to me more than the rest. Very nice :)

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you so much:-):-):-D.

[♥ Kinnixk]

You're welcome (:

[LoveMeNot]

So captivating and vivid. :)

[Lonely Islander]

thank u

[Nami Machae]

very nice :) I really enjoyed reading this

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you:-):-):-D.

[KillerWithWords]

Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem.

Interesting how you named this poem Suicide when in fact it's about living.
The contrast shows how one can be used to reach the other.

[Lonely Islander]

Even i didn't notice the contrast...thank you very much:-):-):-D.

[Leigh]

There is always something to live for and there are many twists i turns in our journey of life, I like the way you have shown both sides of this.

[Lonely Islander]

thank you so much:-):-):-D

[bryandc15]

yeah.... I agree,..... Life's really ironic......

[Lonely Islander]

thanks:):):D