Light in the Darkness

Ridding the world from evil,

but bringing darkness to us all.

Reviews

[Lime-Eater]

I love this! It's strong and deap, yet it's only two sentences! you are a really great poet! :)

[cindy ellen]

this is not a poem!!!!

[Stella]

powerful.. and great

[Aggie Skeleton]

Powerful sentance. May not be a complete poem, but powerful all the same.

[Jen]

Short. I'm not a poet, but doesn't a poem usually consist of more than one sentence? Even a haiku is three lines. This is a profound sentence, just not sure it's a poem.