Blue
A Poem by Paza
 depiction of an emotion 
Bleak, cheerless.
Loving, but living
Under a cloud as
Endless days run together
© 2008 Paza
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An interesting little acrostic to say the least. It starts with what many would think of when they think of feeling blue, but from there you suggest many things. The idea that loving is contrary to living, leaves me to think of unrequited love. Love is a wondrous thing, when it is returned. When it is not though, it would leave you under that cloud as all the days seem to run together. Yes, this is definitely well done.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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An interesting little acrostic to say the least. It starts with what many would think of when they think of feeling blue, but from there you suggest many things. The idea that loving is contrary to living, leaves me to think of unrequited love. Love is a wondrous thing, when it is returned. When it is not though, it would leave you under that cloud as all the days seem to run together. Yes, this is definitely well done.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Lovely, brevity is the soul of wit.
Posted 16 Years Ago
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so humble and yet so awesome... magic
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Vesper depth to azure hues loved it
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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So deep for so few words. I like!
Penny
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 5, 2008
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Paza
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I'm a woman, a wife, a mother, a daughter, a sister, a lover, a friend...I could be the woman next door, you never know.
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