Northern Lights

breathtaking beauty

color bursts delight the eye -

brilliant waves amaze

 

Author's Note

A first effort

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Great job.
This is a wonderfully written haiku, for if I understand the concept clearly, it is not merely a counting of syllables but rather to capture an entire thought, an expression, a description contained neatly in three lines.
THIS deserves to win. I did read them all, and your haiku most aptly matches it's title and the description most perfectly!
Good Luck!

[Fran Marie]

A lovely Haiku most beautifully penned~

THanks for sharing in the Haiku 2 contest~

Fran Marie

[Samuel Dickens]

It has been so long now, but I saw them once as a kid when they were visible in the south. Indeed, their beauty was breathtaking. A lovely little poem, Paza.

[Rachel Cooper]

This is very well done.

I can't write haiku's worth a damn! ><

Also. I really want to see the northern lights.

[Deborah Shepard]

loved it nor have seen but have written much about them before beauty as none has seen so I hear

[bailish]

I love it! Have you actually seen the northern lights? I've never been in the right place at the right time. This poem suggests the event to me.

Thanks!