Haiku

A special love.

your heartsong shimmer
graces my wandering night
light waters blue moon

Reviews

[Amit Parmessur]

Very nice one. I suggest you have a look at this message friend.

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The second issue of Golden Apple is now open to submissions. It will be solely based on Christmas and New Year. Poems, short stories (not more than 1200 words), sketches, song lyrics and flash fiction on the proposed theme of Christmas and New Year are most welcome. We want to create some real magic for this year’s December and are working hard on the best possible way to present our contributors’ writings for this issue.

Do have a look at our general guidelines before you submit anything:

http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/submissions.html

Do enjoy the first issue as well:

http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/golden-apple-issue-1-october-2010.html

Regards,
Golden Apple Team

[Moonflower]

Gorgeous~

[No use.]

3 lines opening up perpetual beauty that linger in the "Wildersoul" ^^

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great work...Passionate a la demure..Glad that I chose this one to read this early morn..I was delighted that you stopped by and commented on my work..I am glad that you enjoyed reading my work..Sunflower

[ByTheRiverside]

Loved the wording and imagery here. "My wandering night" was a great thought, and the scene I envisioned after reading that had the feeling of warmth in a restless situation. Very well done.

[Shay]

Ahh the heartsong.. I have a piece entitled that.. it is indeed a vivid description to something that has nothing tangible other then a notion.. you have got to love that... Graces wandering in the night.. Oh my... sexy....Light waters blue moon... sigh what a wonderful after glow..
great example of a haiku!

[Jae]

very romantic and passionate. I love a good haiku. and this is a great one!!

~Rem

[Dinesh Sairam]

Haikus tend to be less imaginative and more realist. Simpleness is one factor of a good haiku. Although I love the 'phrases' a lot, This wholly isn't a good haiku :)

[Marie Harrison]

How romantic Pax.

i had to make my presence known on this one since i churn out haiku/senryu. that and it's the shortest, simplest piece you have on here. it's so dramatically different from your usual style. you're an onion. so many layers.