Nin_Amour

Anima as Au d'Anais.

elixir of anais nin

flows in your

veins l'amour

 

marrow of filigreed

fire infuses your

treasured lyric

lines of gold

 

your luscious curves

flow out from the soul

of an angel in a strange land

 

your lush scarlet lips

kiss the promise

of the rose's rise

from a prelude of frost

 

your dewy-eyed

yearning draws

this sojourner

across the wilderness

of forgotten sighs

Reviews

[cilla]

First, I can't believe I never found this poem among your writings. You've been leading a whole other secret life. To say I love this does not began to describe my feelings.

It is dreamy, ethereal and it plays like a song spinning over and over again in my head. It is as if Leonard Cohen and Jim Morrison sat down and collaborated on one perfect love song. So, yes, I love this and wonder why we don't see more of this from you?

" this sojourner across the wilderness of forgotten sighs" Words one would whisper to a lover as they shared a pillow.

Namaste ... yes, I bow to you learned master.

[Pax Analog]

That's amazing, darlin', thank you. And yes it meshes well w/your own luscious-textured work. As to why I don't express this mode more often, I have to feel it re the Goddess, & I haven't had that sensitive an interface of late. There are probably a few more nuggets here, & as well as some roses buried in thorny prose. This tender quality is also present in some of my songs. Thanks again for your wonderfully appreciative review. XOXO

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sigh..quite beautiful..

[No use.]

anais nin.. i drink her just about everyday with my bacon and eggs

[Desert Dreamer]

Oh, the elixir of Anais Nin...so sweet with her words, who could not find her and this wonderful poem alluring.

[Moonflower]

This was brilliant and soulful, I like.

[Robert]

im impresed by your use of word choice very uniqe. i think it was french in the begining which is perfect for how beautiful written this poem is, very simple yet so compicated. you can really sense the emotion coming out of the words. i really enjoyed reading not only this poem but some of your other poems as well. i would very much appreciate it if you could look over a couple of my poems if you have a little time. your reveiw would really interest me, and teach me more then you could know. thanks so much for this peice of work, not only for my own pleasure but the expansion of poetry in general.

cant wait to read more
robert

[alan peter kelly]

simile and alliteration always do things to my insides...with work like this i feel less a grain and more selfish for the thought...an amazing write that transcends the subjectivity of my personal preference...

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

sensuous and filled with enraptured love.. you describe the consumed so fluidly here

[Robin]

you have a wonderful muse

[Dark Lady Phoenix]

Very good read!

[Joseph - Michael]

I had to reread the whole thing slowly to understand the whole prosing... It's like reading a piece from the early 1900's in France... A real quick, yet slow soothing expression...

Other than that, it's a real interesting read...