Nin_Amour

Anima as Au d'Anais.

elixir of anais nin

flows in your

veins l'amour

 

marrow of filigreed

fire infuses your

treasured lyric

lines of gold

 

your luscious curves

flow out from the soul

of an angel in a strange land

 

your lush scarlet lips

kiss the promise

of the rose's rise

from a prelude of frost

 

your dewy-eyed

yearning draws

this sojourner

across the wilderness

of forgotten sighs

Reviews

[cilla]

First, I can't believe I never found this poem among your writings. You've been leading a whole other secret life. To say I love this does not began to describe my feelings.

It is dreamy, ethereal and it plays like a song spinning over and over again in my head. It is as if Leonard Cohen and Jim Morrison sat down and collaborated on one perfect love song. So, yes, I love this and wonder why we don't see more of this from you?

" this sojourner across the wilderness of forgotten sighs" Words one would whisper to a lover as they shared a pillow.

Namaste ... yes, I bow to you learned master.

[Pax Analog]

That's amazing, darlin', thank you. And yes it meshes well w/your own luscious-textured work. As to why I don't express this mode more often, I have to feel it re the Goddess, & I haven't had that sensitive an interface of late. There are probably a few more nuggets here, & as well as some roses buried in thorny prose. This tender quality is also present in some of my songs. Thanks again for your wonderfully appreciative review. XOXO

[*** Hey Jude***]

What a divine write! I love the way you have intertwined languages, taking this treasure to a higher level. Remarkable! ~ :-

[Pax Analog]

Beautiful response!

[*** Hey Jude***]

A response from the soul. Namaste

[MOON]

Absolutely beautiful a song of love.

[Pax Analog]

Thank you!

[...]

Stunning! A trance you've hummed into your viewer :)

[Pax Analog]

Thank you! This is the Pisces/Libra texture I mentioned to you. XOXO

[f**k you]

So dreamy and heartfelt...emotion like this is a rare specimen. I feel like I could dance to words like this.

-nicole-was-here-

[Pax Analog]

Thank you, Nicole. Dance away, delicate & slow. . .Perhaps BlackStringTherapy could feature cello. . .;-)

[f**k you]

haha, well, I do play violin! ;)

[Pax Analog]

Wow -- one doesn't often see dancing violinists (unless you count hootenanny fiddlers)!

[MoriartyMesa]

Wow, may need a drink, smoke and lap dance to cool me down but I love the way this was written.

[Mockingbird]

a very lovely sonnet to the one you love. i like the descriptions and imagery.

[Everett DeValle]

This is the first time I have come across your work, and I must say WOW, just outstanding poetry, Loved the use of French phrases that would swoop any Lover...it speaks of your experience...and that alone speaks for itself. Respect.

Lovely poem, Sir.

[octane143]

I love reading you work Pax, always so sensual and I have to read it more than once so each time is like discovering something new!