Oblivion (Love)

SONG LYRIC: Spirit Self is little self's Oblivion -- AND WHOLE SONG IS ON THE PLAYLIST -- DON"T MISS OUT!

Make no more fractured conclusions

zero falderal

I am a way through illusions

hero's journey tall

A thousand miles on a hi-wire

keeps a man awake

Go step by step in the true fire

all for goodness' sake

 

No flock, no block, no fatuous grins

Oblivion (Love)

Oblivion

 

You miss the mark if you believe

more than seeing through

You're better off with some tea leaves

than old priestly coups

God's not some stick in the dead sky

graybeard daddy-o

It is the source of your plum pie:

psychic body flow

 

No flock, no block. . .

 

(Instrum bridge)

 

You're wise to deal with your Shadow

sabotaging grace

It's not a threat, just a bad sow

unawakened face

Ain't no recalcitrant demon

just your woolly head

So get a clue, get a beam on

shift your sight instead

 

No flock, no block, no fatuous grins

Oblivion (Love)

Oblivion

No stock, no crock, no ignorant sin

Oblivion (Love)

Oblivion

Author's Note

WHOLE SONG ON THE PLAYLIST. . .LISTEN! WHOLE SONG ON THE PLAYLIST. . .LISTEN! WHOLE SONG ON THE PLAYLIST. . .LISTEN!

Reviews

[Ravenskald]

"You're wise to deal with your Shadow
sabotaging grace
It's not a threat, just a bad sow
unawakened face
Ain't no recalcitrant demon
just your woolly head
So get a clue, get a beam on
shift your sight instead"

Love this verse , reminds me of Don Juan, if you see Evil stop looking at it !
Thats where it gets it power. A powerful statement

~Raven

[Nik Dendera]

Nice flow, rhythm is spot on. Some nice one liners.

I can kind of see where this might have come from, given our conversations on topics like this. I like the way you refer to God as a stick in the sky-it'll piss some off, but that's only if they miss the point of what you're saying.

Personally, I'd take the tea leaves, but only because there's nothing like a good cuppa and a chinwag on such subjects.

Oh, and yeh, I've listened to the song. I often check your player out whenever I have a few minutes. Wicked piece, greybeard daddy-o (sorry, I loved that bit!)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Great work...and advice really...am going to listen to it now. Thanks for sharing. This would do well to be performed for a live audience even as poetry. I can envision you shouting this to a crowd. Right on!
Light,
Siddartha

[jen]

you really have a way with lyrics...
"You miss the mark if you believe

more than seeing through

You're better off with some tea leaves

than old priestly coups"

love this....it reflects my feelings on religion...

this is really great...

[DevilsNeedLove2]

Too often people look outside of themselves, or project the things they want for themselves onto some big man in the sky, all the while forgetting we carry all the answers we ever need, if only we'd take the time to look. Depending on an outside source to fix things for us and love us unconditionally sometimes seems to be the more comfortable option, but I think it rarely turns out to be so in the long run. I don't know if this is the message you meant to get across with these lyrics, but it's what I have taken away from it. Your writing is beautiful. I have no suggestions, only a thank you. And the song rocks, too. =)