Naked Hearts

Naked Hearts

A Poem by Pax Analog
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Another song lyric, and once again THE WHOLE SONG IS POSTED HERE on playlist, delivered solo live acoustic-electric, several mos. ago.

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Never found a future

now I'm no one on the sly

Tho' my heart's immortal

I still long for secret sighs

 

Naked Hearts are ne'er apart

beyond the yearning

Lay it down to find out

what remains (2x)

 

Come on time-free wonder

solarize the puppet meat

Slake sleek love thirsting

trembling thighs enshrine the beat

 

Naked Hearts. . .

 

(Instrum bridge)

 

Sowing seeds of thunder

contemplating holy war

Not the archon monsters

just a shining solar core

 

Naked Hearts. . .(4x)

 

© 2008 Pax Analog


Author's Note

Pax Analog
As always, just notice that it's a WHOLE SONG POSTED HERE. Enjoy!

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Beautiful song Pax...
Love the yearning lyrics and the electrics really penetrate to the magnetic core ;)

"Slake sleek love thirsting
trembling thighs enshrine the beat" - subtle eroticism at it's best... you do it so well

Loved the song in it's entirety... musically and lyrically mesmerising.


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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sensual... your lines here are expressing the desires of human pleasure
which according to maslow, is a physiologic need. lol...

i like this mr. pax. you have a female counterpart, lyrical love.


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lyrics + music = great song!

Listened twice, tempted to keep on listening.

Thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

That's my favourite song now! really! I love the "punchy" guitar, the up-tempo rhythm (it's quick, I love it), the voice - damn it! your voice! I like the way it "flies"!...
Conerning the lyrics, I especially love:
"Come on time-free wonder
solarize the puppet meat
Slake sleek love thirsting
trembling thighs enshrine the beat"
..."slake sleek" = that's f*cking good! the double "sl" reminds me of bedsheets that someone moves while sleeping, or of water that splashes ;)

I'd like to write as well as you!! ;D I really love it!


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful song Pax...
Love the yearning lyrics and the electrics really penetrate to the magnetic core ;)

"Slake sleek love thirsting
trembling thighs enshrine the beat" - subtle eroticism at it's best... you do it so well

Loved the song in it's entirety... musically and lyrically mesmerising.


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

rock on, i love to read song lyrics, mostly because i write a lot of them myself, someday i hope to put mine to music, i reaaly like this song, you chose some very creative lyrics, keep em coming!
laceyjane

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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