Naked Hearts

Naked Hearts

A Poem by Pax Analog
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Another song lyric, and once again THE WHOLE SONG IS POSTED HERE on playlist, delivered solo live acoustic-electric, several mos. ago.

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Never found a future

now I'm no one on the sly

Tho' my heart's immortal

I still long for secret sighs

 

Naked Hearts are ne'er apart

beyond the yearning

Lay it down to find out

what remains (2x)

 

Come on time-free wonder

solarize the puppet meat

Slake sleek love thirsting

trembling thighs enshrine the beat

 

Naked Hearts. . .

 

(Instrum bridge)

 

Sowing seeds of thunder

contemplating holy war

Not the archon monsters

just a shining solar core

 

Naked Hearts. . .(4x)

 

© 2008 Pax Analog


Author's Note

Pax Analog
As always, just notice that it's a WHOLE SONG POSTED HERE. Enjoy!

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Beautiful song Pax...
Love the yearning lyrics and the electrics really penetrate to the magnetic core ;)

"Slake sleek love thirsting
trembling thighs enshrine the beat" - subtle eroticism at it's best... you do it so well

Loved the song in it's entirety... musically and lyrically mesmerising.


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Great lyrics and yes the song is great. You have a unique style that is magnetizing! I will have to dig into your archives more when the need for good music strikes my soul.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Smooth and beautiful words...

we must let our heart be vulnerable in order to truly love... great compostion.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can personally relate to this tribute to love, or rather, the tendrils of love that transcend time and distance. Such a love stands in the doorway, between the past and the present, always a part of both. It's unforgettable, ever-tangible, and lives on in the halls of memory. It changes who we are forever; and no matter the clouds of life, leaves a core of light at the center of our being. Naked hearts are never apart, indeed.



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful
write here, i like the
words you have penned.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant lyrics once again.

'Slake sleek love thirsting

trembling thighs enshrine the beat'

Absolutely beautiful. Another superlative piece.



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

haha! so you can make song but not poetry.. ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaa! well .. should I give a nice grade?

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I want more then a love like this....Naked Hearts are ne'er apart

beyond the yearning

Lay it down to find out

what remains (2x)
love the lines... and so....lay it down to find out... the love the desire or the sex? with words like this...it's amazing.. ok my rate! come see Magic

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Tho' my heart's immortal
I still long for secret sighs

were my favorite lines
and i love the idea and image of a naked heart

as if your stripped down and baring all
=]]

hmm
you inspired me just now
=]

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Enjoyed very much, captivated me....thanks for sharing. PW

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love song lyrics, because of the strong meaning that lays hidden in them.
You did a fantastic job on these words here!



Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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