Naked Hearts

Another song lyric, and once again THE WHOLE SONG IS POSTED HERE on playlist, delivered solo live acoustic-electric, several mos. ago.

Never found a future

now I'm no one on the sly

Tho' my heart's immortal

I still long for secret sighs

 

Naked Hearts are ne'er apart

beyond the yearning

Lay it down to find out

what remains (2x)

 

Come on time-free wonder

solarize the puppet meat

Slake sleek love thirsting

trembling thighs enshrine the beat

 

Naked Hearts. . .

 

(Instrum bridge)

 

Sowing seeds of thunder

contemplating holy war

Not the archon monsters

just a shining solar core

 

Naked Hearts. . .(4x)

 

Author's Note

As always, just notice that it's a WHOLE SONG POSTED HERE. Enjoy!

Reviews

[Dorchadas]

Beautiful song Pax...
Love the yearning lyrics and the electrics really penetrate to the magnetic core ;)

"Slake sleek love thirsting
trembling thighs enshrine the beat" - subtle eroticism at it's best... you do it so well

Loved the song in it's entirety... musically and lyrically mesmerising.

[Dean Age Era]

I'm a girl from nowhere, a shadow of your immortality. Come and bite from me, my taste is the sin. There is no time,in your entrails... Your heart is naked becauseit is the mirror when my smile finds its way home. You're becoming nothing, I return, deeper and deeper, everywhere.

[alan peter kelly]

try saying slake sleek love thirsting three times quickly...though id imagine it sung slow and more effectively...no one on the sly gave me a wry chuckle...im enjoying the humour as much as the language and theme..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exotic beautiful strum of the mind strings through the sensate nerves of the naked human soulskin~ wondrous word interlacings . . . . .

[Tracie Skarbo]

Big smiles for this one...

Come on time-free wonder

solarize the puppet meat

Slake sleek love thirsting

trembling thighs enshrine the beat

Solarize the puppet meat...that is so unique. You sew words together in the most unusual patterns, and it works so well!!

[Dith]

very nice

your comment on my poem was uber poetic! so thanks for adding to it. i'm glad you understood what i was doing - fusing electronic systems with biological systems/physiology......makes for an interesting comparison

naked is always good. naked hearts are what we should all do to gain understanding. i enjoyed the way you phrase it and the way you toy with language. keep it comin

[Katchzen]

Mm. I'm going to have to listen to this tomorrow. I love these lyrics, especially the first verse.

[Luna Tique Fringe]

not too much more can be said, than what has been said by the others :)
I do like the concept/image of naked hearts..vulnerable with nothing to hide.

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

excellent....what can i say, you are doin it babe! x0x0x0x0x I have enjoyed this one mucho! x0x0x0x

[Ladysue]

What a beautiful song. These are awesome lyrics!!! They speak with tremedous passion.

[Blackbirdsong]

As always your passion comes through musically and poetically. You can't help it. It's at the core of who you are as a person to create this way and it shows in the wonderful way you play with words and make give them your own unique ways of meaning.

For example here:

"Come on time-free wonder
solarize the puppet meat
Slake sleek love thirsting
trembling thighs enshrine the beat

Naked Hearts. . ."

"Slake sleek love thirsting" the sound of the words is primal, loving and passionate in its deepest sense.

Of course it takes course to lay your heart bare like this, but when you do you open the door to truly becoming one with someone.

Now I will go listen to you sing this and sigh.