Clear Ground

Lyric to my 4th song (from top) in playlist of original compositions on profile pg.

 

True desire in your bed

magic movie in your head

Love the long ride while it lasts

this flicker world is burnin' fast

 

Rock the Clear Ground steady

phantom flesh is sacred soul

Hold the Clear Ground ready

here and now's the only goal

Man and woman rule the world

once they get their flag unfurled

Human beings rub their eyes

tiejack empire's built with lies

Rock the Clear Ground steady. . .

 

Life is short but wide as wind

never let your insight end

Trust no other, you're the one

shattered social shining sun

Rock the Clear Ground steady. . .

Author's Note

Lyric to my 4th song (from top) in playlist of original compositions on profile pg.

Reviews

[DevilsNeedLove2]

Your writing is the kind I think many people will be able to recognize personal meaning in. This is my favorite kind. This is one of the most important aspects of any art form in my opinion. Your words have the potential to touch people, so please, don't stop.

"Man and woman rule the world
once they get their flag unfurled"

"Life is short but wide as wind
never let your insight end"

Your fresh use of imagery is wonderful; no tired cliches here. And if more people applied these ideas to their lives, I believe the world would be a better place.

Thank you.

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

now thats some real love makin!/ i wonder the story behind them/ sounds like their first time for sure...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

true blue rose planted in the throat~ vines reach outward~ message relayed in blush petals and thorns where needed~ the poem is sultry and tropical body drawn with social observations~universal trellis always there for hands to grip to climb~

[Storygirl]

Pax, what can I say...a little gritty, a lot sexy. Mmmm. I like your stuff.

[Ervin Stuart]

I just finished listening to your place list. I know this place is about writing but, I enjoyed the music very much. Its nice to hear something original in my ears. I can't wait to let my buddies hear it.

[☮]

Your work comes through so clearly and stays the the point at the same time. You think like a warrior and express angst and redemption simultaneously. Nice flow and a great piece here.

[chloe cruz]

Like Dani says this flows and the rhythm is great! This is my second favorite song out of all yours... its similar to Wildersoul, but not quite.

Great job, once again, your truly great.

Favorite verse:

True desire in your bed

magic movie in your head

Love the long ride while it lasts

this flicker world is burnin' fast

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~ Chloe

[Jane Doe]

'Rock the Clear Ground steady

phantom flesh is sacred soul

Hold the Clear Ground ready'

Wonderful lyrics, almost esoteric in nature. I love this song too! I'm going to have to check out your site soon.

[darkgurl]

This is wonderful, I throughly enjoyed this write I can kinda hear the beat in this. Very well written...Kim

[Laura E. Aranda]

Oh! I feel so blonde right now.....I just went to listen to the music and I 'get' it now! haha
So sorry!
Cheers,lea