Path

It’s a crumbling pathway

We’re walking down

We can see the stars in the distance

Though in our hearts we know they’re unattainable

For now though,

It’s peaceful, and a little sad

But a hopeful kind of sad

So we walk, hand in hand, down this road

I don’t remember where is started

And I don’t know where it ends

But now I know we’ll be okay

As long as we keep going

And look at the stars

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I liked theme and how this plays out...the path is a revolving circle...yet the circle gets bigger and bigger as you make your approach...if you can walk...at some point you will gain understanding again...history repeats itself...

[Pawprints]

Very, very true.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Ditto...I liked this verse...also...

[Cupcake.]

I admire the simplicity, especially because its something I can relate to and have thought of often. Nice, flowing read.

[Pawprints]

Thanks for the review :)