Fake

You'd like to think you knew me

You'd like to think you cared

The way you'd say goodnight

The way you'd kiss my hair

But I know what it was

And I know what you did

You stole me away once more

For now I can see

What was hidden from me

Your voice my charming lure

Now you've broken your words

You've lied yet again

You've chopped me to bits

You see?

Because now that you're done

Now that I know

You've roasted me to a third degree

Author's Note

I didn't entend for it to come out rhyming, but that's just the way it took me. Please review, thanks!

Reviews

[Thisiscrae]

I love it and I like that is rhymes i think it puts a bigger impact on the words

[Pawprints]

Thanks :) I always struggle with rhyming and getting the words to fit together, so I'm glad it turned out the way it did.

[marker_c]

Ouch....love hurts us all. Very cool, enjoyed reading it

[Pawprints]

Thank you, and yes, love is certainly a two sided blade.

[Amanda Granger]

For not rhyming intentionally, the rhyme scheme turned out pretty cool. :P I love when that happens. I can also relate to this one, the last line's image really sticks with you. Very nice!

[Pawprints]

Haha, thanks!

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~ very heartfelt and poignant poetry, M. ... ~ i've dealt with my share of fake and false people and they're definitely disturbing... i don't hate them... i just feel sad for them...

[Pawprints]

Yes, thank you, me too. Forgive and forget, forgive and forget...

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~ precisely... :)