Kiss me

This is sort of a twist on a poem I read a while ago

Kiss me

 

Kiss me hard and long until the sweet is sour

 

Kiss me until the world stops spinning and I am no longer dizzy

 

Kiss me like you’ve never been kissed

 

And love me like you’ve never been loved

 

Kiss me until your lips are numb

 

And then hold me while you wait

 

For your kiss to me

 

No longer a wish

 

Should be stretch the time

 

And be both early and late.

Reviews

[Avocations of Amber]

Very sweet poem you've written here. I'm a pushover for anything related to love or romance. Its like candy. :)

[Pawprints]

Haha, I know the feeling :)

[Storm K.]

I love the repetition of 'Kiss Me' in this, it really makes an impact on the whole poem, as well as the contrasting pairs. Very passionate, and a great poem :)

[Pawprints]

Thank you :)

[Kittywhiskers]

Very moving and deep

[Pawprints]

Thanks!

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~ i'm reading the penultimate line as "should we stretch the time"...

~ beautiful poetry... very magical... :)

[Pawprints]

Whoops! I didn't catch that typo...:p
Thanks for reviewing!

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~ haha... that's okay... happens to the best of us... :P ~ and, you're very welcome... :)