A special Cuban night

On a special Cuban night,
The look in your eyes,
Your smile so bright
Kisses from your lips last through the whole night.

The feelings we share,
With strong love in our hearts,
There is no more guessing,
I knew it right from the start.

The smile you bring,
The laughter we share,
Only brings us closer,
No one else could ever compare.

A gift we both received,
On that special Cuban night,
It's more wonderful than ever,
I can see it clearly now, our love reminds me every night.

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[APOORVA]

The feelings we share,
With strong love in our hearts,
There is no more guessing,
I knew it right from the start.
RELATABLE LINES.


The smile you bring,
The laughter we share,
Only brings us closer,
No one else could ever compare.
THERE IS ALWAYS SOME ONE WHO BRINGS SMILE TO OUR FACE, RARE AND LOVED ONE.


A gift we both received,
On that special Cuban night,
It's more wonderful than ever,
I can see it clearly now, our love reminds me every night.

LOVE IN CUBAN NIGHT...WOW!
SUCH AN IMPRESSIVE WRITE

[Paul]

Thank you for your kind words. As well as the critique. I appreciate that. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.

[Isabella Ivy]

This experience is enviable, to say the least. But I'd sure like to hear you take that within from deep inside your chest and compare it to what it's never been compared to before... where the stars talk to you and your seat has to be nailed to the floor, where little children are throwing petals down from the rafters and wnen you take your love in your arms you find yourselves in a whole new space! Just saying :):):) I.I.