Waiting

Just random words put together.

I wait and wait for the time to be right,
Where there is no boundary, or any risks to fight.

The sun rises up, and the sun sets down,
and my world keeps spinning around and around.

There must be an answer, or a prayer to say,
For this is what I search for, at the end of the day.

Closer and closer, the solutions come to mind,
where the answer is had, I may just be blind.

But search and prayer, wherever you  roam,
And stay true to yourself through skin and bone.

For if it's something that you love or hate,
The best thoughts can be there, if you just wait.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Coming from a very patient person, someone who hates impatience, yer you could say I like this poem haha.
Meaningful, inspirational, beautiful. Paul another amazing write haha.
Your rhyme scheme is also flawless loving it.
Please keep writing would be a shame if you where to stop

[Sam]

beautiful!!!!! waiting is a part of loving.....it helps your love to grow!

[Paul]

Thanks Sam. I'm glad you liked it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Sometimes waiting for too long makes one feel so frustrated and their every feeling starts to fade away. This poem truly tells what it feels like to wait. I love it. Well done.

[Paul]

Thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I did. You're welcome ☺