October's Medley

October's Medley

A Poem by Pauline

October’s clothing

A warm wrap of amber leaves

Hedgehog is dreaming

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Summer gold is gone

October’s subdued tones hum

In soft russet tunes

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Black sky’s orchestra

Played on corrugated roof

Dancing rain fairies

© 2022 Pauline


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I'm with Christine, the first two good the third excellent:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


dear Pauline .. . You have orchestrated Autumn to be emotional with Winds and Rain… it seems. to resonate with a Crescendo that Creates Compassion. gently, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


Pauline

2 Years Ago

Thanks Pat. Autumn here is usually a mixed bag. We've had some out of character warm weather but 'ti.. read more
All three wonderful Pauline, though your third stands out for me. A splendid offering for the month of October, and so visual too. Loved the colour and references to nature. We'll done dear friend.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Pauline

2 Years Ago

Hi Chris. Many thanks for your review. I thought I'd answered your response but apparently not. Blam.. read more
love these, Pauline...but especially number three....

I get symphonies on my roof in the rain in October along with the acorns dropping for percussion.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Pauline

2 Years Ago

Hi J. I can imagine what the acorns sound like. Thanks for responding to these haiku's.

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Added on October 20, 2022
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I've been writing poetry for some time now. It allows me to escape some of the doldrums of life. I also paint when life allows me some quiet time. I wouldn't say I was great at either passtimes but I.. more..

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