No More Pain

More of an experiement than anything else....

Dig. Dig. Dig

Dig. Grunt. Dig.

Cry. Cut. Scream.

Dig. Grunt. Dig.

Brick. Brick. Brick.

Brick. Brick. Brick.

Crack. Crack. Split.

Cry. Heart. Breaks.

Brick. Brick. Brick.

Hope. Look. Stand.

Smile. Laugh. Sing.

Kick. Betray. Stab.

Pain. Suffer. Fall.

Alone.

Brick. Brick. Brick.

Brick. Brick. Brick.

Build. Cry. Breathe.

Four. Brick. Walls.

Finished. Trapped. Safe.

                    Brick. Brick. Brick.....

Reviews

[Isabella Disney]

Thank you. A thousand times, thank you.

[Raja]

wow. wow. wonderful.

Magic of words. Power of tunes. Speaking of truth.

Like it all.

Thank you.

Raja.

[R J Askew]

Great stuff, great use of language and very inventive.

[Rain]

You through in a little Bohemian. This free verse built you a room where you feel safe, but also confined. Walls of brick can create feelings of safety, but restricts your ability to fly. Very interesting. Rain..

[Wildecat]

I too hope the walls will come down, this is a well written poem, thanks for sharing.

[G]

Oooooh this one is to much. I can see the bricks layer by layer. Hopefully ythe walls will come down, but I understand. Original. I have to read more of your works