will you read this as long as it's short

will you read this as long as it's short

A Story by pdk
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tell me in four words or less

"
where would I meet you
now
no
I'm in a logic class
English majors sit under trees
and have...

this short story was studied there it was by James Joyce later on somebody important I wrote out a page while waiting  to see says you write like James Joyce there was something in one of those books about a dog's howl on the street and asking about do you think the writer knew he was using the word dog as though it was spelled backwards

instructors go on trips and tell you to get another person to write a final paper in order to graduate by a certain date

writing a paper and being told that book hasn't been read getting a grade before the assignment is finished

I forgot grammar you have your own style

don't memorize math and geography just write and draw

I can't help it if my love skipped the love beat I can't help but call it the letter of love it's not beyond the realm of possibilities 

you want to write a book here write a book you like big books I got you books from

these are the last I'll read now I can write I hear you're a writer what do you write written anything new lately written any new songs

how many rain drops do you want and where do you want them to fall

bored/anxious...I have to do something
right now
right here

did you say right or write the last fifteen words you said didn't make sense if you want to move it then you move it

tell something remarkable about yourself so that we'll remember you I didn't recognize you I thought you were a tourist I'm giving
a guided tour

somebody always has to know where you are going around the world

© 2016 pdk


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pdk
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Stream of consciousness, perhaps?

This line feels like the start to a very interesting poem:
I can't help it if my love skipped the love beat I can't help but call it the letter of love it's not beyond the realm of possibilities

Posted 8 Years Ago


Here's my 4-word review: "sounds like writing list" . . .

That is so say, each line is so disparate, none of it goes together or follows logically together, so it must be that each line is something separate that one might want to expand on later in a more detailed & graphic & understandable write *smile*

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is interesting, there's a lot of points you raise that are definitely something to think about. I do feel though that it's just a bit too random and disconnected; yes there's a lot of interesting points but what's the overall message of this? What's the one thing that you want people to get away from this? It seems to start with the theme of school and class but that's seems to get lost and forgotten by the end. That's just what I thought though, it's definitely raises some things to consider and proposes some ideas to have a think about.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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