ten by ten

day's detail

don't move you like to move I can do anything

you're a genius you're a poet it's at four right

never see him again I won't let you down turn

a round ball bullfight ballerina mountain college auction bus stop

everything trunk memory cement chocolate pinto dog trees lake coffee

swing waltz  enlightenment distractiion siren sense skeleton body sound Fall

leaf quantum proton/electron flower laugh cry at the end

wind rain walk fly mail present paper pen perhaps happen

cat record telephone sea wonder wander travel deer camel elephant

zillion piano guitar clothes desk office sheep saddle intimate open

Author's Note

structure

Reviews

[ranscan]

I will begin by thanking you for entering this piece in the "Metric Madness" contest. It met the line and word count requirements I set, and it is interesting.
I find it difficult to review this work, it does not seem to be open to any form of measurement I am familiar with, so I will simply suggest that some extension of the author's notes to perhaps aid the reader to better appreciate the concept and idea behind the work are in order.