Red Oceanic

She sits on the shoreline and stares out at the sea

A lonely romantic who's waiting for me

She's brighter than the moon there in the night

Among the dark blue coating she's orange light

The ocean is pleasant and lonely

Her tune is rustic and groaning

Like a madrigal cat all important

Making its way to the border

Though I may not touch her lips

I'd dance as if she had legs to step

Entertaining her from the shoreline

I'd sing to her as if she were mine

And although I've never known her

You wouldnt break my grandeur

A lifetime of pleasant tone and fancy

We two could have been romancing

She sits on the shoreline and stares out at the sea

A lonely romantic who's waiting for me

She's brighter than the moon there in the night

Among the dark blue coating she's orange light

Author's Note

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Reviews

[alice]

"She sits on the shoreline and stares out at the sea
A lonely romantic who's waiting for me
She's brighter than the moon there in the night
Among the dark blue coating she's orange light"

I am thinking a lighthouse. Is it a personification? If not, than awesome, although, unintentional writing.
This would be a great accompaniment to Sinead O'Connor's song Jackie.

[Alexa Tasch]

It flows smoothly. It was very beautiful, descriptive, romantic, and well writen. Very good job.