Come into my web.

She hated men

Hated everything about them

Bordering on the pathological

Hated the way they touched her

Hated the way they used her

She even hated taking their dirty money

She did like killing them though

Watching their power slowly ebb away

It was the ultimate orgasm

Definitely so much better than sex

She didn’t like the spurters

Underwear was so damn expensive

But she was beginning to perfect her technique

Directing the flow away from her

Learned strangely enough from a surgeon

He would have been proud of her

It was her breasts that caught his eye

The rest his imagination took care of

He had never done it blindfold before

It sure felt so sensual

God, he could feel the explosion building up inside him

She directed the open razor with total precision

Marveling as his body went into spasm

God, the orgasm was out of this world

Definitely so much better than sex.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Bell you pervert! This was spooky and frightening to most mortal men of any sanity! Where do you draw your inspiration. Entertaining and flowing, literally, stuff!

[Paul Bell]

Think it was a girl in Hamburg minus the open razor. lol

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I really like this and for all the right reasons. It teaches me that an open razor is the best remedy for a terrific orgasm. The surgeon would be proud of this student. Maybe, they should copyright and market this technique. Before its too late and someone else grabs it.

[Paul Bell]

Sadly the surgeon was one of her victims, but he did die happy she said.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

One never knows haha. The customer always dies.

[Paul Bell]

It's those 3 for 2 deals, you really should read the small print. lol

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

The customers didn't. They were in a hurry hahaha 😆

[Betty Hermelee]

This is very explicit, the tone, your words, everything...even the the most minute detail...
You really get into it, in a very readable way.. and of course this is human nature right? I liked it Paul, even though a bit gruesome! Fondly, Betty

[Paul Bell]

It is a bit gruesome, but she did have her good points I'm told.

[Betty Hermelee]

Does it matter? It’s poetry!

[Paul Bell]

She didn't like poets. lol

[barleygirl]

I love this profile becuz it's shockingly intense. You have a way of taking the darkest side of human nature & making it into a tongue-in-cheek spoof on human behavior in general. It's as if you're daring us to balk & also hinting that we all have a hidden side that is too gruesome to admit to. After my daunting childhood growing up with a child rapist for a dad, I was intent on showing people I am not a man-hater. But in fact, now that I'm old & honest about things, maybe I am a little bit (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Paul Bell]

Sending you a razor as we speak.
Plus, you've got a lot of land to bury people you don't like.

[Inessa]

Now that is a strong woman! Pathologically insane, but a strong woman! Lol. It's a fantastic premise, Paul. Very much the Black Widow, she is, and no doubt she keeps her razors very, very sharp. Very creative writing. I love the premise and its execution (pun intended).

[Paul Bell]

This is not you part-time, is it.
She probably likes cats. lol

[Inessa]

Nup! I prefer dogs! Lol