The Christmas tree shone brightening up the room Decorations hung in splendour Gifts lay beneath the tree He was sat in his favourite armchair A man at peace with the world He would watch the children run down the stairs The room would come alive as they opened their presents A special present for the good lady The noise drifted into the past A long time ago Seemed like yesterday The accident The Policewoman crying telling him the news The day he died inside Seventeen years now Always the same ritual Made the day seem right, special Memories came flooding back He sat down to rest Slowly drifting off to sleep They found him that way In his favourite armchair A man at peace with the world.
It does seem like yesterday that we were busy making Christmas wonderful for everyone around us , and then we play it out again when the grandchildren come on Christmas morning.
In this day and age it is so very sad that parents are often not included in family celebrations and so many old and vulnerable people only have memories and nothing to look forward to after a lifetime of caring .... as John has said sometimes death is peace
Whatever happened to Christmas. Easter eggs on sale now. No wonder the years fly by.
5 Years Ago
My son keeps telling me that things can't stay the same forever, times change and we have we have to.. read moreMy son keeps telling me that things can't stay the same forever, times change and we have we have to move on. What a sad attitude, but what can i say ? He is a good son .
Christmas can make us remember the good or the bad days. Lonely life when alone without something missed. A sad tale written my friend. Sometime, death is peace.
Coyote
Your Christmas anecdote reminds me of some statistic I once heard about how the holidays is a time when most people drop dead of a heart attack from overeating combined with emotional interactions. Your poem puts a face on that statistic. The first half has a bit of a "smug" tone (not in a bad way) as if the scene cannot be spoiled, it's so perfect. Then (as you usually do) in comes the spoiler. All so honest & true-to-life . . . love the ending! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
So very, very sad, Paul. Heart-wrenching, in fact. Incredibly well done. So emotive and rich in imagery. Compassionate too.
The world is looking pretty bleak right now. Ouch.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Nothing that alcohol won't cure.
5 Years Ago
True. A nice bit of Christmas cheer will do the job.
Merry Christmas, Paul. Cheers!
Aloha Paul, we cling on to the memories for as long as we can. I hate the thought of forgetting that in itself makes me tearful. The quiet resignation and calm of this depicts the sorrow beneath the surface. Sad but beautiful read x
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Strange time Christmas.
Every emotion come through.
Only for a while one can live off memories... after that heartaches for the real thing gives away and joins the recollections.... then peace follows! A picture of sorrow and the final relief, your poem depicts!
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Christmas I suppose should be joy.
But shear pain for others.
5 Years Ago
The best way to beat the blues is to find a reason to celebrate... a pet ( or two) helps a lot. Whe.. read moreThe best way to beat the blues is to find a reason to celebrate... a pet ( or two) helps a lot. When a whole lot of people are trying to please others, the least we can do is admire their efforts!!!
5 Years Ago
Defintely, why I delegate everything. lol
5 Years Ago
....And you make sure to have a very good time and spread the joy. That is the only way to spend t.. read more....And you make sure to have a very good time and spread the joy. That is the only way to spend the holidays.
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