The road never changes Only the seasons The ghosts pass by Murder at twenty three Adultery at twenty one Produced a son The madness at thirty nine Twin sisters The children of time Twenty four, they would scream The hanging w***e The road knew more Number one seen all Predicted the fall The great and the good Misunderstood The road was the end The very end She screamed at number five Number four knew why It was her time to die The children played At the gates of time They would sing their songs Like the nursery rhymes Twenty three and twenty one produced a son Cried the sisters of time They knocked down her door Killed the w***e Killed the w***e She saw the crime Just in time, to scream Why, oh why She had to die She had to die The road knows why The seasons pass by The seasons pass by
Whoa! This is powerful! Your lines are sketchy yet intense. As I read, I was getting a series of memories conjured up by your raw details, reminding me of lost souls who touched my early adulthood, these ones on the way to being more & more lost, while I was just passing by & dabbling in an optional down-and-dirty stopover. There are so many of these children of time . . . you nailed it with the haunting tone (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
The children of time forgotten by the society.
And then they become completely invisible to the world !!
( your poem brought to mind, the very sad saga of what is happening to the children in Yemen... one can only watch in horror and lose sleep over it).
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Yeah, Yemen is just the practice ground for western hardware. Hows this new President of yours.
6 Years Ago
He wants visit Trump , on his first trip as soon as he takes charge!!!
People reduced to numbers and only the numbers seem to remain with time. (Shakes head) After all the horrors they went through, they deserved a decent funeral.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Man, what did I do with that spade.
Probably want words said as well.
Wonder if I coul.. read moreMan, what did I do with that spade.
Probably want words said as well.
Wonder if I could write nursery rhymes.
I like poetry and stories that tell me something.
Sometimes the shortest poems hit the hardest.
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