So im gonna be the odd one out...cause I'm not a real girl.lol there is something releasing about not knowing... not being. There are some of us that spend so much self in being power leaders..mothers, daughters,care givers, business women that we just want something we can't control except the ending. Unrelenting, unleashing, seductive seclusion...or doesn't take talent it's just nature...nature we suppress in every other aspect of life. Your right...it's just for us...selfish....
We can turn from temptress to mother earth in a blink, It's our genetic imperative. Some day perhaps you guys will figure it out, 'til then, just remember it's silk to seduce and cotton to cuddle. :))
It's ironic when you get guys and gals who do one night stands. And seem to prefer them to actually having a steady relationship with one person. I think it comes down to being burnt badly by someone they really loved. And scared it will happen again to them. So they spread the misery and the so-called fun with others. Basically saying they are having a great time. When really it just last for a short time the fun. Then they go to the next person for the next fix of fun to fill in the loneliness and heartache caused by what they are doing. Playing with fire and people feel in general. Outwith their own feelings.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
I suppose at the time, they think it's the right thing to do.
6 Years Ago
I agree. Life and human in general. Are strange creatures in general. None of us are perfect.
there is something about women that makes a man wonder and never stop to think.. can it be the mystique, the aura or whatever.. i like the poem it shows a woman as she is
What a perfectly beautiful poem. Written with such a precision
The sexy lady in black seems to know her wants and needs ! She may not be true to others. She is definitely true to herself!
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6 Years Ago
She's certainly a vamp.
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That is because she is sexy in any colour she chooses!
Aloha Paul, this is a really smooth read, your phrasing - really smartly laid. She’s not the kind to dally in feelings, but she’ll be what you want in the moment. That would do your head in. A fine poem sir!
Ah! Virgin review. Unblemished by others. Lol. The sense of angst or frustration in the underneath. The unattainable, unfaithful ... but why is she ... there's always someone who can tame the lioness, not that I'd know anything about that ... but I do digress. Sleek, smooth, and well presented. Great poem
I like poetry and stories that tell me something.
Sometimes the shortest poems hit the hardest.
If I post something serious, don't worry, a funny poem will follow. Don't hesitate to tell me if my po.. more..